Shopping traffic blues

Posted: August 19, 2011 by scottcarbines in Geelong, mojo, Social Issues
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Poor infrastructure in a new Waurn Ponds commercial complex makes shopping a nightmare. Scott Carbines speaks with locals about the dangers of going shopping.

  1. Scott, a follow up with council and local MPs would be good. Good script and VO tells the story well.

  2. ivoburum says:

    hi scott – I think this is a strong yarn – with nice use of intro overlay for great talent – nice bounce in your script – a proper mic will fix your wind problems for next time – well done mate – go mojo

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